Kia Ora Leo, Felix and Isaac, I think all of your volcano themed poems are awesome! I am impressed with the way you have collaborated together. Thanks for sharing the 5-7-5 haiku, it will help other writers who visit your blog to try writing a haiku themselves.
Kia ora Felix. Great work working collaboratively with the others and getting your work up on your blog quickly. We may just have to have another look at your word choices in the haiku's though as some of them don't follow the 5-7-5 syllable structure. Some good word choice to get a lot of meaning across in only a few words.
Kia ora Leo, Isaac & Felix - this work is a great example of Learn, Create, Share - tino pai! There are some great word choices throughout the different poems which tell me you have learnt a lot about volcanoes. The syllable count for haiku can be tricky. You can check how many syllables are in a word by going to: https://syllablecounter.net/ I look forward to seeing more of your work. Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Kia Ora Leo, Felix and Isaac,
ReplyDeleteI think all of your volcano themed poems are awesome! I am impressed with the way you have collaborated together. Thanks for sharing the 5-7-5 haiku, it will help other writers who visit your blog to try writing a haiku themselves.
Kia ora Felix. Great work working collaboratively with the others and getting your work up on your blog quickly. We may just have to have another look at your word choices in the haiku's though as some of them don't follow the 5-7-5 syllable structure. Some good word choice to get a lot of meaning across in only a few words.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Leo, Isaac & Felix - this work is a great example of Learn, Create, Share - tino pai! There are some great word choices throughout the different poems which tell me you have learnt a lot about volcanoes.
ReplyDeleteThe syllable count for haiku can be tricky. You can check how many syllables are in a word by going to: https://syllablecounter.net/
I look forward to seeing more of your work. Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)