kia ora bloggers this is my hundred word story
Jack was walking along the street when he suddenly stopped at a rocket ride. He reached into his back pocket to grab a coin so he put the coin into the rocket ride and he got ready to go to space then it just went up and down. He got out of the rocket ride ride with sadness then looks up at a sign at gets an idea which is to sell lemons 82 year later of jack selling lemons he grabbed his bag of money that he had been collecting and walked to the rocket ride and put the coins into the rocket ride and then it takes of
Kia ora Leo. Well summarised story of the Coin Operated short film. It's hard isn't it to fit enough detail into 100 words! He takes off into...what?
ReplyDeleteHello Leo
ReplyDeleteI like your story because it includes lots of description, but remember to put some punctuation in some spots.
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